The preposition 'to' is not needed before 'ancient civilisations', and 'civilisation' should be plural to refer to multiple societies.

The phrase 'take advantages from' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'take advantage of'.

The phrase 'numerous amount of' is redundant. 'Numerous' should be used alone when referring to a large number of people.

The word 'distribution' should be preceded by the definite article 'the' to specify the particular distribution being referred to.

The noun 'proportion' should be preceded by the definite article 'the' to specify the particular proportion being discussed.

The term 'capable solutions' is not commonly used. The correct term is 'viable solutions' to indicate that the solutions are feasible.

The term 'well-distribution' is incorrect. The correct term is 'well-distributed' to describe the state of wealth being evenly spread.

The phrase 'discuss about' is redundant. 'Discuss' should be followed directly by the object, without the preposition 'about'.

The verb 'owns' should be in the plural form 'own' to agree with the plural subject 'people'.

The phrase 'enormous people' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'a large number of people' to indicate a large population.

The word 'either' is incorrect as it implies a choice between two options. The correct phrase is 'both those who have' to indicate inclusion of both groups.

The phrase 'less fortune' should be 'less fortunate' to correctly describe people with less wealth.

The word 'depolarising' should be spelled 'de-polarizing' in American English and hyphenated to show the prefix 'de-' clearly.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect in this context. The correct preposition is 'of' to indicate the object of taxation.

The noun 'eradication' should be preceded by the definite article 'the' to specify the particular act of eradication being discussed.

The noun 'government' should be plural 'governments' to refer to more than one political authority.

The word 'monopolise' should be spelled 'monopolize' in American English.

The word 'Socialism' should not be capitalized unless it is at the beginning of a sentence or part of a title.

The phrase 'in 1970s' is missing the definite article 'the' to correctly refer to the specific decade.

The noun 'socialism' should be replaced with the adjective 'socialist' to correctly modify the noun it describes.

The word 'then' is a misspelling and should be replaced with the conjunction 'than' for comparison.

The adjective 'major' should be preceded by the indefinite article 'a' to form the correct noun phrase.

The gerund 'starving' should be replaced with the noun 'starvation' to correctly convey the state of suffering from a lack of food.

The word 'showing' is not the correct term in this context. The correct term is 'rise' to indicate the emergence of a dictator.

The noun 'fortune' should be plural 'fortunes' to refer to multiple instances of wealth or luck.

The word 'failes' is a misspelling and should be corrected to 'fails'.

The word 'tariff' is incorrect in this context as it refers to a tax on imports or exports between sovereign states. The correct term is 'tax'.

The word 'poors' is incorrect; 'poor' is both the singular and plural form when referring to people with little money.

The verb 'earns' should be in the base form 'earn' to agree with the plural subject of the sentence.

The word 'hugh' is a misspelling of 'huge'.

The word 'hugh' is a misspelling and should be corrected to 'huge' to accurately describe size.

IELTS Essay Band 5.5: Hunger and Advances in Agriculture