The noun 'caring' should be 'care' to correctly convey the meaning of deserving attention and protection.

The phrase 'were died out' is grammatically incorrect. The correct past simple tense is 'died out'.

The noun 'consequence' should be plural 'consequences' to indicate multiple negative outcomes.

The clause is defining, so 'that' is more appropriate than 'which'.

The conjunction 'And' at the beginning of the sentence is unnecessary and should be removed for better sentence structure.

The noun 'coexistences' should be singular 'coexistence' to refer to the concept as a whole.

The phrase 'fast dying out speed' is awkward and unclear. 'Rapid extinction rate' is a clearer and more commonly used term.

The adjective 'harmony' should be 'harmonious' to correctly modify the noun 'coexistence'.

The term 'compensative aids' is not standard; 'compensatory aid' is the correct form, with 'aid' typically being an uncountable noun.

The noun 'problem' should be plural 'problems' to match the context of multiple issues.

Extra spaces after a period should be removed for proper punctuation.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to the surface of a planet; 'on' is the correct preposition.

The phrase 'on earth' is idiomatic and does not require the definite article 'the'.

The word 'paste' is incorrect; the correct term is 'pasture', which refers to land covered with grass and other low plants suitable for grazing animals.

The word 'distinction' is incorrect in this context; the correct term is 'extinction' referring to the disappearance of a species.

'Neglection' is not a standard English word; the correct term is 'neglect'.

The phrase 'on its own' is the correct idiomatic expression meaning independently.

The adverb 'eventually' is misspelled; it should be spelled as 'eventually'.

The word 'surffering' is misspelled; the correct spelling is 'suffering'.

The term 'world-wide' is more commonly written as one word, 'worldwide'.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'global' to specify the global context being referred to.

The gerund 'breaking' is misspelled; it should be spelled as 'breaking'.

The verb 'dies out' should be in the plural form 'die out' to agree with the plural subject 'species'.

The phrasal verb 'ate out' is incorrect in this context; 'ate up' is the correct phrasal verb meaning to consume completely.

The verb 'except' is incorrect; the correct word is 'expect', meaning to anticipate or look forward to.

The noun 'humans' should be plural to refer to people in general.