IELTS Essay Band 5: Letter, Inquiry to a friend

You have done a good job of addressing the task, but there are areas where you could provide more detail. For example, you could provide more information about the job offer and why you are uncertain about moving. You could also ask more specific questions about life in the city. Your tone is appropriate and consistent, and you stay focused on the task throughout the letter.

You have made a good attempt at writing a letter, but there are several areas for improvement. Your sentence structures are a mix of simple and complex, but there are errors in your complex sentences. Your spelling and word usage also need improvement. Despite these errors, your letter is still understandable. Keep practicing and focus on improving your grammar and spelling.

You have done a good job of organizing your ideas and expressing your concerns and questions. However, you could improve the coherence and cohesion of your essay by using more linking words and phrases, making your concerns and questions more explicit and detailed, and using separate paragraphs for different aspects of your situation. Also, try to use a greater variety of linking words and phrases to avoid repetition.

Dear Daniel, your lexical resource needs improvement. You have used a limited range of vocabulary and there is a lack of variation in expression. There are several errors in word formation and spelling that make your meaning unclear. I suggest you to improve your spelling and word formation, use a wider range of vocabulary, use vocabulary more flexibly and accurately, use more precise words to convey your meaning, and use idiomatic expressions to make your writing more natural. Keep practicing!