'Others' should be 'other' as it is used as an adjective before the noun 'two boys'.

The word 'ang' is a misspelling of the conjunction 'and', and 'huges' should be 'hugs'.

Removing 'in' corrects the prepositional phrase to 'living there,' which is the proper expression.

There should be a comma instead of a dash to separate 'Vancouver' and 'BC'.

The correction fixes the misspelling of 'challenging' to ensure proper spelling.

There should be a space after the comma following 'such as'.

There should be a space between 'doubts' and 'that'.

The correction 'I have' fixes the verb phrase, ensuring proper spacing and tense for the context.

The infinitive 'to hear' should be used after 'Hope' to form a correct sentence structure.

The possessive pronoun 'your' should be used to indicate that the help belongs to 'you'.

The verb 'provides' should be in the gerund form 'providing' to match the continuous tense of the sentence.

The word 'whether' is incorrect; it should be 'weather' to refer to the atmospheric conditions.

The word 'weather' is corrected from 'whether' to denote the state of the atmosphere, which is the intended meaning.

The comma is replaced with a period to correctly end the sentence.

The phrase should use the gerund form 'accepting' after the preposition 'about'.

Replacing the comma with a period corrects the punctuation to end the sentence properly.

The verb 'Move' should be in gerund form 'Moving' to function as a noun at the beginning of the sentence.

Changing 'live' to 'have lived' provides the correct verb tense to indicate an action that started in the past and continues to the present.

The preposition 'in' is used instead of 'at' to indicate a state or condition.

IELTS Essay Band 5: Letter, Inquiry to a friend