While your friend was away on vacation, you stayed in his apartment. While you were there, you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
You have done a good job in addressing the task. The purpose of the letter is clear, and you have addressed each part of the question. The tone is appropriate and consistent. However, you could have been more direct in stating the purpose of the letter and provided more details about the replacement bowl. Also, expressing more remorse for the accident could have made the letter more effective.
You have done an excellent job in terms of grammatical range and accuracy. Your sentences are well-structured and clear, and you have used a variety of sentence forms. Your punctuation is also well managed. Keep up the good work, and try to incorporate more varied vocabulary in your writing.
You have done a good job of organizing your ideas and linking them together in a logical manner. Your use of cohesive devices, such as sequencing and reasons, is effective in guiding the reader through your text. However, you could improve your essay by using more varied cohesive devices and more complex sentence structures. Keep practicing and you will continue to improve.
You have done a good job in using a wide range of vocabulary in your essay. Your word choice is precise and appropriate, and you have used vocabulary flexibly to express your thoughts and feelings. However, you could improve your Lexical Resource score by using more idiomatic expressions and experimenting with more complex sentence structures. Keep up the good work!