Replacing 'the high-cost manufactures' with 'high-cost manufacturing' corrects the noun phrase to refer to the process of manufacturing, which is more appropriate in this context.

The phrase 'waiting shorter' is incorrect. It should be 'waiting less time' to convey the intended meaning.

The term 'human capital' is uncountable and should not be pluralized.

The word 'manufacturers' should be 'manufacturing' to refer to the process of production, not the entities that produce.

The phrase 'life quality' should be 'quality of life' to follow standard English usage.

The phrase 'less people' should be 'fewer people' because 'people' is a countable noun.

The word 'contaminant' is incorrect in this context. The correct word is 'concomitant', meaning accompanying or associated.

The word 'economic' should be 'economical' when referring to something that is cost-effective.

The phrase 'the job' should be 'their jobs' to agree with the plural noun 'employees'.

Changing 'service' to 'services' corrects the noun to its plural form to match the context of the sentence.

The name 'Uber' should be capitalized as it is a proper noun.

The words 'in' and 'the' should be separated by a space.

Adding 'that' after 'is' introduces a subordinate clause, improving the sentence structure and clarity.

Changing 'with' to 'by' corrects the prepositional phrase to convey the intended meaning more accurately.

IELTS Essay Band 7: Expansion of International Companies and Globalization